Lane and Ginny collapsed onto the soft grass in the back yard. Gazing towards the sky their six year old minds began conjuring shapes from the puffy clouds passing overhead.
“Look, a bunny!” cried Ginny, pointing upwards.
A few moments later Lane exclaimed, “That’s a puppy dog!”
The dark dog-shaped cloud rumbled. A torrent of rain let loose.
Moments later the twins crashed into their kitchen, puddles of water forming around them.
“What happened to you?” chuckled their mother as she regarded her two soaking children.
Ginny and Lane looked at each other sourly.
“The puppy dog peed on us!”
Word Count: 100
[This is my entry into this weeks Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Use the photo prompt to create a short story in 100 words or less.]
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The Well of Fiction 
Cute.
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Thanks.
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Hehehe. The voices are great, the settingperfect. Love it.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Haha, this is adorable! Kids, they really are something else 🙂
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I have a bunch of gems from my own kids when they were younger. I might throw those into a story someday. Glad you liked it. 🙂
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Lovely, just had to smile, thank you.
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Thank you. 🙂
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That made me laugh. Thanks
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Thank you, Neil. 🙂
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Love this, thank you.
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Thank you too. 🙂
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Pleasure.
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Adorable. 😊
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Thanks. 🙂
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Very sweet, and believable children’s voices. Nice.
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Thanks. 🙂
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This is so charming, nicely done. 🙂
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Thank you Loré. 🙂
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The cuteness! You did such a great job at capturing the personality of the twins, and at showing us the kind of relationship they shared with their mother. Just wonderful.
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Thank you very much. I appreciate that. 🙂
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This captures the imagination of small children very well – and made me giggle too.
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Thank you. Glad I could make you giggle. 🙂
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Aww, cute view of childhood adventures. Makes me wonder if you write these two often.
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Lol. No, this is the first time the twins have appeared, but I have two sons about 15 months apart and when they were little they provided me with ample story fodder to write stuff like this. Thanks for the comment. 🙂
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That was pure fun!
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Thanks Dale. This was one of those stories that just kind of wrote itself. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Love it.., so like kids,
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Thanks! 🙂
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Aw, bless ’em! I originally tried a story using that fire-breathing hippo top centre 🙂
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LOL!
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Dear Chris,
It’s been a while since I’ve seen you around these parts. Cute story. What child doesn’t love lay on the ground and ponder clouds?
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Yes, I have returned from far-away lands with new tales to tell. 😉 Good to be back.
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This a fun story that made laugh. We were on the same wavelength, I too wrote about what kids see in clouds, but I don’t have your sense of humor.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Love the children’s imagination here. That darn puppy dog!
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Ikr? Lol… Thanks Joy.
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Oh, Hilarious! Loved it! ❤ Giggling hysterically.
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🙂 Thank you.
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this made me chuckle!
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Always happy to make people chuckle. Glad you liked it. Thanks. 🙂
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Very cute, well done. Out of the mouths of babes come some of the best lines
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Indeed they do. My sons provided me with ample quotes when they were young. Thanks for the comment. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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Damn good voice here. Brought a chuckle as well.
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Thanks. It actually made me chuckle as well so I’m glad it worked for others. I appreciate the comment. 🙂
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