Sweat poured off Larry’s brow. Chinese summers were particularly humid and since his arrival with the research team, he’d struggled to keep cool, though it wasn’t just the dampness in the air that caused Larry’s perspiration today. If all went well, Larry’s team should uncover the last keystone which would finally divulge the location of the lost Zhou Dynasty treasure. This discovery would be the crowning achievement of Larry’s ten year obsession.
A sharp cry from the pit captured Larry’s attention. Rushing to the edge, he called down.
“You have something?”
“I think this is it, sir!” came the reply.
As the stone was carefully lifted by rope from dig site, Larry’s hands trembled with anticipation. It all came down to this.
The mud-caked block was gently placed on the examination table and buckets of warm water were poured over the tablet. The water smoothly cascaded over the surface revealing the long awaited logo-syllabic glyphs.
Larry hovered over the find, scarcely able to breathe. Moving his hands down he began to translate. Everyone crowded in the tent was silent.
“What does it say, sir?” burst out Johnson, shattering the calm.
Larry’s face fell.
“Eat at Hong’s. Best duck in Hao”
Word Count: 200
[This is my entry into the Sunday Photo Fiction challenge, hosted by Alastair Forbes. Write a short story of 200 words or less from the photo prompt provided.
I did a small amount of research into the Chinese language and history of the dynasties, but I acknowledge there may be technical errors. For a short story like this it may not matter so much, but the perfectionist in me prefers complete accuracy.]
~V
Still laughing although I had to look up “logo syllabic glyphs” 🙂
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HAHAHAHA That is brilliant. Laughing out loud with that.
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Thanks! I actually chuckled while I wrote it. Thanks for reading.
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I can imagine 😀
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I often wonder if some of these things they haven’t yet translated are shopping lists or something. Great story!
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LOL’s ! Better luck to him next time! Maybe a fortune cookie telling him exactly where to look for the treasure.
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Lol… brilliant idea. I suspect he may have had better luck with that.
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LOL! You had me laughing off my chair! 😀 This is a great one! 🙂
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Thank you. I wasn’t sure if it would work, but I guess it did. Glad you liked it.
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Boom! Great build-up to the punchline. 🙂
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obsession kills, true enough, but run your persistence with a good heart and all will fall upon the good destiny. well-written truth. thank you!
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Sound wisdom. Thank you for reading and sharing.
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At least that ancients couldn’t spam your inbox with it.
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Ah yes, good point, Dave.
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Very funny. Not much of a treasure I guess. Great build up to a crowning disappointment.
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Thank you!
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This is wonderful! Such great tension throughout the story and then the wild twist of a ride at the end!
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Thanks PJ!
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My pleasure!
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“The water smoothly cascaded over the surface revealing the long awaited logosyllabic glyphs.” What a great line!… Loved the ending!
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Thanks. It’s nice to get compliments on style. I appreciate that. 🙂
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