“Ugh,” grunted Megan, fanning her face. “It’s so hot out here. Why didn’t you bring an umbrella like everyone else?”
“What?” asked Evan, tearing his eyes off the multi-chromatic cars speeding around the track.
“I’m hot!” she said.
Evan shrugged. “Do you want a sip of my beer?” he asked, holding up his half-filled plastic cup.
“No, I want to go home,” she said. “This is so stupid. The cars just keep going around in circles. They finish right where they start. What’s the point of that?”
“It’s called racin’,” he said, turning his attention back to the race.
Megan watched as the vehicles rounded the corner. Around and around. She began to realize her life had become like the race. Evan had no ambition. He seemed content to live in their trailer, scraping by and dulling himself with beer. He’d convinced her to quit school and take a job at the grocery store.
Around and around. She wanted so much more.
Standing, she turned to leave the grandstand.
“Where you goin’?” Evan asked.
“I’m sorry, Evan, but you were just a pit stop. It’s time I got back into my own race again.” Megan said walking away.
Word Count: 198
[This is my entry into the Sunday Photo Fiction challenge, hosted by Alastair Forbes. Write a short story of 200 words or less from the photo prompt provided.]
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Oh wow… our stories are eerily similar! Great take on the prompt and wonderful storytelling!
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Thank you, Lori. Great minds and all that…lol. 😉
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*laughs* indeed, The Voice.. and you are most welcome 🙂
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Btw, you can call me Chris. 🙂
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Thank you, Chris 🙂
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really like how you brought that full-circle (pun intended). Good stuff!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Serves him right!
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How could he have known that an innocent day at the races could destroy his life, shatter his dreams… oh, wait, he doesn’t have any. Or a girlfriend. Nice piece!
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It wasn’t ‘just racin” after all! She was inspired to change her entire life for the better! Good for her! Nice story! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Go Megan!
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Great story. Glad she is going to make her life better.
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Thank you, Donna.
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Nice. I’m glad she left. If you have better ambitions and want more in your life, you need to find a guy who will take that journey with you, not bring you down to his level. Nice take 🙂
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Thank you.
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someday you have to take a decision. great
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Love the way she associated her life to the racing. Good story,.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Good for her! Yeah!
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He’s still alive. It’s just his brain that’s dead. He’s also going to be alone. It sounds like she’s supporting him. He better wake up, all of him including his brain. Well down, Chris. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you Suzanne!
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