Nearly fifty of us huddled together around our equipment: Scientists from different fields of study all gathered by the government for this historic event. We watched with equal parts anticipation and trepidation as the unnatural midday clouds obscured the sun over the large mountain clearing. Magnificent flashes of lightning provided the only illumination.
By the time our satellite images revealed the objects true shape, we could do little but wait for arrival. Not knowing their destination, a coalition of governments frantically partnered together, placing “greeting teams” in locations across the globe. It seems my location had been the correct guess.
A collective gasp sounded as the massive ship burst through the thick cloud cover which it had been causing (Something about exciting the atmospheric ions, according to one physicist). Wide-eyed, I stared at definitive proof that we are not alone in the universe.
Then, not unlike the spaceship from that Spielberg movie, the craft rumbled ear-shattering tones. Having anticipated this form of communication, we all turned to the towering monitor from our computer, waiting for the translation. My mind swirled as I imagined what our first contact message from the aliens would be. Did they come in peace or as conquerors?
And then, the monitor glowed bright with words.
“Sorry to bother you, but we seem to have lost our way. Can you point us in the direction of Alpha Centauri?”
[This is my entry into the Sunday Photo Fiction challenge, hosted by Alastair Forbes. Write a short story of 200 words or less from the photo prompt provided.]
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I loved the Close Encounters references and adored the humour at the end. Nice!
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Thanks Graham. I wanted to bring in the imagery of Richard Dreyfus from the movie’s climax, so I figured a reference would help. Glad you liked the ending. 🙂
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I also appreciated the reference and the funny ending! Great tension and excitement building up, and then such a humorous disappointment.
And wow, what a fabulous translator they have. I hope the real one works that well when the time comes!
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Science fiction always has the best translators. Star Trek, Dr. Who, Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy… How nice for everyone in the universe to be able to speak English…lol.
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It does lead to fewer plot problems. 😉
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I love the humour here. Hopefully we won’t try and nuke them before they leave!
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Good point. I guess that depends on who we put in the White House.
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You’re right. It’s hard to build a wall around space. 😉
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Definitely not men from earth….they stopped and asked for directions! LOL! Wonderful story!
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Funny! Thanks for the smile. Great story!
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Friendly aliens! I hope they ask them to stay! 🙂 Great story with a humorous ending! Loved it! 🙂
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Ha! Nice build up to a humorous ending. Great!
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Thank you!
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Haha cute. Turns out the aliens are only lost! Great write!
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Very good. I love the build-up towards the comedy ending (which I saw coming but we have the same sense of humour!). Great stuff!
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Yes we do! Glad you liked it.
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OMG – that was hilarious. Brilliant.
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Thanks! 🙂
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Very amusing story! I love the unexpected ending. 🙂 Nicely done.
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Thank you, Louise. 🙂
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How dangerous can ‘lost’ aliens be???? Loved it!
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Thanks. Glad you liked it.
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