His bike was propped carefully against the wall next to the back stairway. Jeremy had purchased the ramshackle two-wheeler to avoid any attention his car might have caused had anyone recognized it. His weekly “meetings” with MaryBeth were too enjoyable for him to stop.
“Are you ever going to tell your wife about what we’re doing here?” asked MaryBeth as Jeremy prepared to slip out the back door.
“You know I can’t,” replied Jeremy. They’d had this conversation before. “She would never understand and if she found out, she’d never look at me the same way again.”
“How do you know? She might even want to join us,” pleaded MaryBeth.
“Are you crazy? She’s just not into… this. I’d lose her respect if she found out,” said Jeremy, pulling a jacket over his massive frame. He was a burly man with a thick beard and hands calloused from working in a foundry.
“All right sweetie. I understand. See you next week for more knitting lessons?”
“You bet, Grandma,” Jeremy replied with a sheepish smile.
Word Count: 174
[This is my entry into this weeks flash fiction challenge for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers hosted by Priceless Joy. Write a short story of 150 words or less (+ or – 25 words) inspired by the photo prompt provided.]
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Hahaha! Loved the twist at the end! He is taking knitting lessons and thinks his wife would think less of him if she knew. Great story Yinglan!
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I’m sorry, I called you Yinglan. Please forgive me. My mistake. Great story!
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No offense taken. I consider it an honor to be mistaken for her. She’s a wonderful writer. 🙂
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Thank you for being so kind! I was embarrassed. LOL!
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LOL, I actually thought that he was going to be attending dancing lessons or something like that 🙂 knitting is perfect!
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Aww… hard to fool you. I hope I wasn’t too obvious…lol.
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I would never have guessed knitting! Perfect activity, LOL!
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Aha, love your story! The ending is just perfect 🙂
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Thank you!
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I thought it’s probably not the obvious, but like Angie, I was thinking dancing. Knitting is much more fun, though. Great take on the prompt, really enjoyed your story 🙂
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Thanks Sonya. Glad you liked it.
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Aw, bless 🙂
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Oh that ending made me laugh out loud! Very clever, and cute.
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Thanks Joy. I started off in a very different direction and scrapped the first story when it ran too long. The twist just hit me and I rewrote it as a humor piece instead. Glad you liked it.
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Sometimes a story surprises me like that too. Glad it worked so well in your case!
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Effervescent little piece. Love the description of the fingers .
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Well done! That sounded pretty risqué to begin with but it was only his Grandma teaching how to knit. Very funny. He’s so worried someone will find out he rides a bike lol.
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Thank you.
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Hah. Love the twist!
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Thanks!
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Ah, I had a feeling the ending wouldn’t be quite what might be expected. I liked that it was his grandma. 🙂
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Thanks Laura. I figured, “Who’s more innocent than a grandmother?” Glad you liked it. 🙂
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You had me there. Thinking, like everyone else I bet, that it wasn’t grandma he was visiting.
DJ
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Glad you liked it Danny and thanks for reading.
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Wonderful intelligent writing. It was nice to be led on and then readjusted!
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Thank you Graham. That really means a lot. I appreciate that you took the time to read and comment.
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What a closure! My ears were pricked for some nefarious activities. Well done!
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I’m glad the story worked for you. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it. 🙂
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You are welcome 🙂
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